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MessageSujet: Re: Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyMar 20 Juin - 12:25

Voilà une suite pour Bleeding Feather. ^^
Je la poste ici, et merci de signaler les fautes : je ne suis pas très bon en anglais...^^
Et si vous voulez proposer un titre... Allez-y ^^



“Who cares? Who cares, now that everyone is dead?”
“Everyone's not dead. We're not”
“Yes, but you know what I mean… No one lives around here anymore. They’ve all moved to an even bigger city, or died. Why couldn’t I take that feather?”
“Because… It is not natural… This colour…”
“Oh please Grandpa! It looks so beautiful! Why can’t I have it?”
“Your mother wouldn’t have wanted you to.” He said firmly.
It always worked. The boy would then say: “All right…” with a sigh, and then…
“But why wouldn’t she have wanted that? I will take it unless you come up with a good reason!”
Aaahhh…… He was growing up, this little one… Well, he himself didn’t know why one shouldn’t touch this feather, but he had a bad feeling about it…


Dethiseus tried as hard as he could to make the boy’s grandfather accept, but unfortunately, he had been touched by a Healer before, and thus was more immune yet also far more sensitive than most humans…
That at least was a good thing too, because otherwise he would never have been able to manipulate his grandson into seeing the feather on the ground. Maybe he should just give up for now and let the boy try to convince his relative… After all, humans were still the best at convincing other humans…


“Have I ever given you a wrong advice before?”
“Yes you have! Three times you told me to do something and I nearly died from it!”
“I keep wondering why you think I was wrong these times. You just didn’t listen till I completed my sentences! I wasn’t telling you to eat that berry, nor was I telling you…”
“But you didn’t tell me not to!”
“No, I was telling you to wait before you… No wait!”
Too late. William had already taken the feather and put it in his pocket.


Dethiseus went away. He knew the boy would be shielded from the powers of his kin the moment he touched the feather. The old man would look after him, no, they would look after each other. They wouldn’t fear Leanan or Reapers, and the man was used to living from what nature provided. Of course they would be in trouble if they met people, but he was confident it wouldn’t happen. No, the family he was in charge of would be fine without him. And he needed to see someone.

~~~


The Wanderer kept walking, kept looking for her lost love. She had already explored this continent, and was now heading towards the ocean, planning to embark on a ship going to the next one.
“Wanderer! Wait!”
She didn’t even stop to look at whoever was calling her.
“I know something about where he may be!”
She slightly slowed down…
“Who?”
“Merael…”
“What do you know?” She looked back at…a Healer.
“I know that a friend of mine, a Guardian…”
The Wanderer looked stunned.
“Of course! Don’t think you were the only Angels seeing each other in secret. Many of us do that, but we hide ourselves well… Only a few, like me and this friend of mine, are only that: friends. But you were the ones with enough courage, or passion, to try asking the Elders for freedom. I must say I have been surprised by Reehvea…”
From the look on her face, the Healer saw that she was absolutely not interested in what he had to say about Reehvea.
“Erm…Anyway…My friend Dethiseus told me that he couldn’t take the risk of coming see you by himself since you’re being watched, so he asked me to tell you that a child of the family under his responsibility picked your feather up and he will lead you to the Vine Cave where Merael is hidden. I’ve got to go now. Good luck!”
“The Vine Cave…My feather...…”

~~~


“Grandpa? I’m feeling bad about that place…”
“Poor William… You know pretty well I’m not feeling good either.”
“Then why do we have to go in here? Can’t we just go back to the old city?”
“We would be in trouble if we did. Humans have come, and they don’t appear to be well-disposed towards other people.”
“But why going there? We could go anywhere else…”


Dethiseus now needed a way to make this small family go to the Vine Cave. Now that the boy was completely out of reach, he had to work only on the grandfather – and on the dangers around them. If he could get William to think there may be something fascinating in the area…


As usual, William’s grandfather got him to go where he didn’t want to. In the evening…
“Can you tell me a tale? Please?”
“I… I can’t remember a lot of them, you know…”
“Come on, I know you can think of a hundred tales in no time! I love your tales! Especially the ones with the Feÿs…”


That was it! The Guardian had found the way to get the little one want to go to this secret cave only his grandfather knew – because he had shown him the way a long time ago, when he hadn’t been touched by the Healer who later became his closer friend…


“Ok, I will tell you a tale about this place we are going to. Legend has it that a long long time ago, a Feÿ named Yrwin lived in a cave of the region, but no one had ever been able to find it…”
This night, the boy named William didn’t sleep. He dreamt while looking at a starlit sky, he dreamt of a Feÿ, of fierce knights and magic, he dreamt…

And his dreams awoke something. Deep in the forest, a hidden trace of ancient magic resonated with this believing heart, and a woman appeared out of nowhere, sitting on a tree…
“Yrwin…”
As a gentle blow of wind, a whispered secret, a name ran in the forest.
“The Vine Cave…is mine…”

~~~


The Wanderer easily found resonance with her feather, and began to follow it, coming closer and closer to the little boy who had taken it, and then…

Yrwin was a solitary Feÿ, who lived of darkness and silence… She didn’t know what had brought her back, but she remembered the Angels who took her cave, so many years ago… Without even noticing her presence, they chose to set down here, and they were so noisy… She was too weak at the time, but now, coming directly from the Old Land, she was powerful again… This cave was hers to begin with, and she would take it back!! Eyes closed, she began to sing…

She couldn’t feel it anymore! It was as though the feather had vanished in the air!! Panicked, she looked desperately for this William and his grandfather…

Dethiseus felt the power leave… His chest hurt so much he couldn’t help crying, and when he looked, it was pulsating light, a light which had the shape of a feather.

Merael felt the spells around him weaken then disappear. His own power was gone too, but it didn’t matter, nor did matter the excruciating pain in his chest. Only mattered the absence of the protections that had so long prevented him from escaping. He began to crawl towards the entrance of the cave…

William felt the feather vibrate in his pocket. He put it out and noticed that its colour had changed from metallic silver to a nearly transparent grey.
“Grandpa! Grandpa! Look, a spell of the Feÿs! The feather, it…”
“Come on, kid. There’s no such things as Feÿs, it was just a tal… Oh no…”
The grandfather noticed the feather while it began to emit light. He then remembered all his experiences with the Angels. So did William, but he was too young…
“We’d better go somewhere else. Quick!”
“But, grandpa, the Cave is just there, look!”
He looked at what his grandson showed him.

Merael arrived at the opening of the Cave, and slowly got up…

The Wanderer saw the Cave.
“Merael!”
He looked at her.
“Ceyn…”

Yrwin emerged from the woods, and saw a Guardian standing up in the entrance of her cave. She went to him and took his feather calmly before entering the Cave.

“No! Merael!”
Ceyn ran towards him, to support him, to help him…

The pain was gone. Dethiseus had the power again, but it was so weak… He had to go to the cave, though. He began to run…

“The Feÿs…They’re back…Come William, let’s go away from here.”
“But these people… Can’t we help them?”
The old man thought about his experiences with such people.
“No, boy. They’re Angels, they will be ok.”
They left without turning back.


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^^ C'est bien ^^ Mais tu crois que ma grande soeur va aimer? Deja, y'a un "happy ending" (je veux dire, ils se retrouvent) et je crois que c'etait pas prevu...
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Je l'ai fait en collaboration avec elle (comment j'aurais pu faire un aussi peu mauvais texte sinon ?) et... elle aime pas trop ^^
Qu'est-ce qui était prévu ?
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*soupir*... C'est re-moi ^^ Et encore un vieux chiffon cliché ^^ Pas que vous vous attendriez à autre chose... Mais c'est encore pire cette fois, même moi je le trouve pire que d'habitude... Bon, bon courage si vous lisez ^^


Heedless

« Who cares ? Who cares, when everyone is dead ? »
« Everyone's not dead. We're not »
« It's like we were ! »

~~~

Decades ago, two neighbouring lands engaged in war. At the time, it had only been matters of power, ambition and possessions. Now, after all the atrocities committed in its name, it has become a matter of honour for sons who sought revenge for their fathers’ murder. Generations later, the damage caused to both countries was so beyond the expected that both warlords’ younger sons were sent to the border to discuss the terms of an armistice. Their escorts departed, never to return. On the assumption that their children had been killed, both sides intensified the hostilities with renewed anger.
~~~

« Caelares ? Do you know this place ? »

« I was about to ask you the same question Elerius. I’ve never seen trees so tall in these woods. We didn’t stray from the track did we ? »

« I don’t think so… Yet I never noticed this glade when we came before. »

« Maybe we just didn’t pay that much attention. Let’s go a bit further to see if we recognize anything. »

« Wait ! I think I heard something. »

The two stood silent, listening. Elerius was fascinated by something, yet his elder brother didn’t seem to react to it.

« What is it ? I don’t hear anything. »

« Come over here… Maybe I’m closer to it… Ah, the sound coming from the middle of the clearing… Music ? »

« What are you talking about ? Elerius ? Do you hear me ? Elerius ! »

~~~

Caelares went towards him, unsure of what was happening. As he approached, he spotted a large circle, its outline devoid of grass, on the border of which Elerius was standing. When he stepped on it, he too heard the wonderful orchestra that had charmed his brother. Something deep inside him was almost abnormally attracted to it, and that alarmed him for a moment, but his curiosity pushed away the nagging thought. He understood too late what it meant. Elerius had already pulled him into the circle.

Everything disappeared in a blur of joyous laughter, shimmering veils, rainbow coloured flowers, and a vivid, unearthly music. They forgot immediately what they had come to do in the first place as they saw the ethereal and frolicking crowd. They barely noticed that there were other human beings dancing with the Feÿ folk. But that didn’t matter. They felt as if their hearts would drown in longing and sadness if they didn’t join the delirious farandole. Instinctively, they moved forward and their feet left the ground as delicate hands grasped their own, leading them to the cheerful dancers against a background of violas, reed flutes, harps, lyres and bodhráns, an improbable yet most melodious explosion of an air that seemed to be the very essence of music and nearly painfully resonated in the hearts that strove to pulse and vibrate at its rhythm.
~~~

Years pass as minutes in fairy rings. Feÿs do not worry as humans do about the passing time. Their lives, though not endless, stretch on spans so long that mere humans cannot conceive of their lengths. Where they dwell, time itself changes of nature.

Arekeus felt his limbs grow heavy. He felt as if the round was growing with frenzy, spinning with inhuman speed. Horrified, he saw his hands start to wrinkle, felt his eyesight dim. With all the will and the strength he had left, he tried to drag himself away from of the dance. A part of him still wanted to remain there for the rest of eternity, yet what reason he had left ordered him to leave as quickly as he could before he died. He wasn’t the only one struggling to break free. Two other men not too far from him were also trying to slow down and pull away. Their hair was white and their aged faces showed anguish and strain.
~~~

« Elerius, we don’t have enough time. At least I don’t. So listen. Try to slow down as much as possible and don’t worry about the getting out : I’ll push you. Now, on three… One… »

« Wait ! What about you ? »

« Two… »

« I’m not going without you ! Caelares ! »

« Three ! »

~~~

They found themselves lying on the snow, in the clearing. Some of the trees around had been burnt to ashes, others thunderstruck. Only the fairy ring remained unchanged, the grass still eerily luscious and green while frost and rime already claimed their rights over the landscape ; its lethal beauty rendered even more mysterious in the devastated scenery. When they finally dared to look at themselves, they only found the confirmation to what they feared. They had waned, just as the trees ; their wrinkles were the traces branded to their skin, their lost youth and carelessness, the emptiness left where the majestic oaks had been completely consumed. Caelares wasn’t with them. He had lost his last chance to escape, and would dance till exhaustion.

Arekeus and Elerius went back to their homes after agreeing on the end of the war between their countries. There, they only found ancient battlefields, where crows nested between skeletons. No one had survived long enough to see them return. They went back to the forest, hoping that the other would have found a prosperous land and that the destruction they had witnessed was only proof that the war had ended, but that they lost it. Deep inside, they knew that it wasn’t true. But they still hoped.
~~~

« We are still alive. »
« But not them. And we don’t have much time left before dying of old age. »
« That’s still a few years. »
« That’s not enough to achieve anything that could make a change. »
« But that’s enough to start. »
« To start what ? And why ? There’s no reason to anymore. »
« To rebuild. Because we can still hope. »
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wa~~~ c'est trop bien !!! un peu triste...mais c'est trop super comme histoire !!
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OUinnn! Encore un truc si bien ecrit que ca deprime d'essayer de faire un truc qui puisse arriver ne serait-ce qu'a la cheville (fallit ecrire chenille...)de ca...

Mais trooop bien!!!
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Lifeless

“We weren’t born in the same family, yet we choose to be brothers. We decide to value the others’ lives more than our own. And if we weren’t born at the same time, we decide to die on the same day… ”
~~~
« This is the end, isn’t it? »

His smile was weak. They were the last ones. In a few hours, the enemy would arrive in this room of the palace. They would have gone with the rest of the army to defend their homes, but the king had requested their presence and eventual help if he didn’t have the courage to commit suicide. He was too old to defend himself.

If the enemy soldiers were to find him alive, he would only suffer meaningless humiliation and torture. He didn’t believe that it was part of his duty as a monarch. He had tried his whole life to provide his people with peace and prosperity. He had succeeded, until now. When this war started, he knew that he stood no chance against an army ten times larger than his own and eager to obtain lands for their families that their country could no longer shelter. His ideas about justice and tranquillity had only been of the kind that couldn’t survive in this world. He had been foolish enough to realize too late that they belonged only to the realms of fairytales…

He had asked if anyone wanted to fight, telling them that they would surely lose. He had hoped that they would all flee. They didn’t. Those who didn’t have a family to take care of decided to stay. And his two sons, the two orphans he had brought up, his deceased sister’s child, whose father also died of illness, and the street boy who passed out at the palace gate, stayed as well. Leyëvin and Jelerth, who grew up as brothers, who would have inherited his power had this war not begun. He had asked of them the hardest of all tasks. There they were. For the upcoming end, and until the end. Now, one last look at the night sky, and his dagger’s lethal gleam…
~~~
Leyëvin closed the old man’s eyes.

« What are we waiting for now? »

He turned back to his foster brother, who stood up behind him after paying a last tribute to the man who brought him up in a palace, yet left him free from the court’s jealousy by never officially adopting him and treating him no better than the other officers. Father and son. But only in their hearts.

« We wait for them to celebrate. Wait for them to drink more than reason, to rejoice and let their guard down. Wait until they come in this deserted palace, thinking themselves its owners, their minds heavy. Then, it will be our time. »

He took the metallic flask hanging at his waist.

« For courage. »
~~~
They both sat beneath the window, admiring the familiar scenery. But the hills around were scattered with lifeless bodies, the river’s clear waters tinted crimson with blood. Twilight’s scarlet skies seemed to reflect the deadly wounds so many had received. And soon, a rust-coloured moon made its way across the bleeding heavens, followed by its funeral cortege of dulled stars. They sat there all the time, talking sometimes of their childhood, the sky or the clouds. Never of the unavoidable. They drank slowly and in moderation.

« Leyëvin? I feel sleepy… »

« Then sleep well, little brother. I’ll wake you soon. »


Such simple words. Not words of soldiers or noblemen. Words of small children talking as brothers.
~~~
He watched silently as the poison slowly crept in Jelerth’s veins. His breathing had become fainter. The smile on his face didn’t disappear. So peaceful. He himself was feeling a general numbness in his limbs, but that wouldn't prevent him from fighting. As a nobleman’s child, he had been protected from such poisonings, which were frequent among the members of the aristocracy. His parents and later his uncle had him ingest small amounts of various noxious substances that caused fever and nauseas during a few days but shielded his body from possible attempts of murder.

Footsteps. Laughter. Salacious jokes. Loud noises of metal clinking. He would not see himself and Jelerth be tortured and insulted. Would not witness the destruction of their homeland. He would make sure he died fighting. He stood up. Now was his final battle.
~~~
“I’m sorry Jelerth. I’m sorry…”


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ouiiii! Enfin!!!!!! ^^ Bah, pour les commentaires, se referer a ceux plus haut: trop beau trop bien etc... etc... ^^
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"fanfic" des Musiques de la Frontière de Léa Silhol... En français pour une fois...

On lui a dit d'attendre, alors elle attend. Que les siens viendront la chercher, alors elle guette leur arrivée. On a omis de lui dire qu'on ne voulait tout simplement pas d'elle, qu'elle était différente. Bien sûr, elle s'en doute. Mais ce ne seront jamais que des soupçons non-confirmés, auxquels elle refusera de croire tant qu'elle n'y sera pas obligée...

Elle avait trois ans, maintenant elle en a dix. Elle attend encore, elle attend toujours. Elle a oublié pourquoi, et même ce qu'elle attendait. Elle ne sait pas qui elle est, elle ne l'a jamais su. Elle ignore pourquoi la fleur coupée qu'elle porte fleurit toujours, pourquoi sa couleur devient de jour en jour plus sombre et en même temps éclatante, d'une beauté qui scarifie les iris de qui ne s'y attend pas. Mais elle ne cherche pas à savoir, elle ne l'a jamais cherché. Elle ne souffre pas. Ni de la faim, ni de la soif, ni même de la solitude. Du moins elle le croit. Elle rêve les yeux ouverts et ses songes se précisent petit à petit.

Elle doit aller quelque part. Quelque part où elle ne sera plus en étrangère, où personne ne s'étonnera ni ne détournera le regard à sa vue. Où l'on ne fera pas attention à arracher les "mauvaises herbes" qui poussent autour d'elle. Où elle sera enfin chez elle.

Alors pour le moment, tant que rien ni personne ne vient encore pour elle, elle attend. Et peut-être un jour finira-t-elle par comprendre qu'il n'y a plus rien à attendre. Qu'elle doit, et elle seule, trouver son chemin...
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.... Neutral
J'suis obligée de commenter ? Bon ben j'espère que je vais pas trop me répéter...
C'est époustouflant ! Superbe ! Magnifique ! Génial (et voilà, je me répète...) ! Tout ce que tu fais est incomparable !
Mais qu'est ce qu'on peut dire d'autre ?

PS : Je préfère quand même le premier parce qu'il est plus long alors le plaisir dure plus longtemps.


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Merci ch'tite soeurette et 'Thisa-chan ! D'ailleurs... t'aurais pas oublié un "e" ? Neutral Ça fait... un peu bizarre drunken
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Oui! Je suis absolument d'accord avec Arthisinette! Plus c'est long mieux c'est! (je te rappelle que tu me dois encore quelques pages ^^)
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Quelques ? héhé mais c'est pas très cher payé ça... La prochaine est en préparation... ^^ ça fera bien 2-3 pages ^^ donc quelques pages ^^ Je préviens mon humeur est à moins 396 (celsius) alors ce sera pire que d'hab...
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Je veux bien ^^ Mais moi j'ai un avantage: j'ai des nouvelles en reserve ^^
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grrrr comment elles font ça ? T__T
Elles écrivent super bien et en plus elles ont de l'inspiratioin...

echo : Où ca un "e" ?
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à "j'suis obligé (e) de commenter ?"
je soutiens les deux autres. c'est trop bien ! ça me console presque de t'avoir déprimée (non je rigole)... moi ben vous allez devoir attendre (longtemps) à moins que je ne ponde un poème... mais je pense pas.
yoru aussi écrit super bien... en plus les sujets sont relativement variés (par rapport aux miens...)..
bon, j'arrête de vous envier et j'essaye de faire pareil. (j'essaye..)
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J'ai tout relu et c'est tout super beau^^

J'avais besoin de relire les ecrits trop beaux de grande seurinette surtout depuis que son ordi est xxp et que j'attends d'avoir a nouveau un de ses textes... T_T

Et Tiefug, NON je n'ecris pas bien.
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OUiii-iiiiiinnnnnnn Sad >_< tout pour me culpabiliser grmbl... Bon je poste le bout du prochain chiffon que j'ai commencé... Ça s'annonce plutôt long mais je sais pas. Bah c'est bien cliché comme d'hab ^^ Bon endormissement ^^ Ayo ? Ça va avec le titre ^^ edit 1 -> apparemment la déprime reste le moyen le plus efficace de me faire écrire...


Sleepless

Do not dream, do not imagine. Do not fear, do not cry in your sleep. Your dreams are our realm, your imaginings our servants. Your sleep makes our power, and the tears you shed at night flow as our rivers…
~~~

Trapped, bound by invisible chains. On the ceiling, the tree leaves outside cast a soft shadow, sun rays passing half trough them, lighting the room with delicacy. As he lies there listening, unmoving, helpless though calm…

…Awakening…

At first, he had been scared. The following times, only mildly startled and somehow disappointed. They always wondered why he slept that much. They often asked him what he dreamt of. To this he only answered the first times, never bothering again when he found that nothing would ever change.

He rarely slept. And he never dreamed. What they thought was sleep were those moments he laid wide-awake, yet unable to move or utter a sound, sleepless, breathless, almost lifeless. As to dreams…

Sometimes he saw scenes beyond understanding. Vivid images of a strange beauty and violence. Recollections that were not his own. Or maybe they were. He doesn’t remember. This never happened when he was supposed to sleep but made him collapse in what resembled unconsciousness. His senses were never more acute ; he would feel the feathery contact of the wind on his skin, hear its hushed murmur as it flies across the heavens, smell the faint aroma that remains long after it has gone and taste the bittersweet longing it brought as a gift to those that could receive it.

Somehow he knows that he has lived forever, though not as the same person -the same child, in the same families, the same cities or the same continents. And something tells him, once in each of his lifetimes, that he has surely lived in different worlds.

And now, he was once more almost nine years old. Never has he existed more than nine years as the same being. Soon would come the time to disappear again.

…Daydreaming…

“Narcolepsy.”

“What ?”

“Narcolepsy. N-A-R-C-O-L-E-P-S-Y. A kind of chronic neurological disorder that makes the brain unable to regulate sleep-wake cycles normally. The patients feel fleeting urges to sleep various times throughout the day and can’t help falling asleep no matter what they are doing when it hits them. Some, as your son, also experience cataplexy, a sudden loss of voluntary muscle tone : they lose all ability to move or even stay in a position that requires effort, such as standing or sitting. Moreover, he seems to have heavy hallucinations and paralysis at the beginning and end of sleep. He is extraordinarily mature for a child of his age, I wouldn’t have suspected it has his heart rate not proven me wrong. Most patients can’t control a slight panic, yet he is only awake, without the least sign of being afraid. He…”

“What you are telling me is that Sueño has some weird disease that no one has ever heard of ? My son is NOT insane, sir ! You tell him, Suey, tell the doctor that you are a very normal boy, that you sleep well and often and that you dream of what all boys of your age dream of, of cartoons, fights, football matches… Anything !”


As usual, he didn’t say anything. He just looked at them, with his big, pale silver eyes. Then, he slid off the chair he was sitting on and went to the window, where he stood motionless gazing at the cloudless autumn sky.

In the waiting room, all could hear a woman bursting into tears.

…Cataplexy…

“… He said that Suey was very young to be narcoleptic. Since he still in a child, he can’t even give him more efficient drugs… Yes…Yes… No, he’ll take them twice a day during a month, then if nothing changes we’ll have to go back and make further tests… No, but he has all the possible symptoms… What are we going to do ?…”

She couldn't help but cry at the same time. The light turned red. She couldn’t see it through her tears and the rain on the windscreen. Nor could she see the other car, coming from their left. She was too desperate to hear its frenzied honks, trying to get what little comfort she could from the voice on the other side of the line. Until she lost consciousness.


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MessageSujet: Re: Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyJeu 9 Nov - 8:58

Great !! C'est génial! euh c'est en rapport avec la réincarnation ou quelque chose non ? Je dois y alller là^^.
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MessageSujet: Re: Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyVen 10 Nov - 20:52

ENFIN!!!!!!! -^^- -^^ -^^ ^^- -^^- ^^- ^^- ^^-

J'adooore et je veux la suite!

(pas par petits bouuuuts... T_T)
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MessageSujet: Re: Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyVen 10 Nov - 21:18

c'est beau.......mais on pige rien pour l'instant... Neutral
j'en veux plus ! Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
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MessageSujet: Wai !!!   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyVen 19 Jan - 21:29

C'est trop bien !! Trop émouvant... Même si c'est que des trucs tristes...
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MessageSujet: Re: Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyVen 19 Jan - 23:22

Geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^^ En ai le souffle coupe ^^ Trop beau de trop beau!^^ SUUUUGOOOOI
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MessageSujet: Re: Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyDim 21 Jan - 0:49

eto~~c'est fini ?? c'est tout ?? Non....
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MessageSujet: Re: Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo   Sur demande de Yoru > rêvasseries d'echo - Page 2 EmptyLun 22 Jan - 20:49

Mais c'est pas fini euh !!!!! >_< Pourquoi vous êtes tous convaincus que c'est fini T_T
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